OctoFlash's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Little Wheel]

perfect.

great atmosphere, chilling music, just perfect.
nothing else to say.

[Krank]

okay

i would give you a 8 for the whole thing (i really liked the simple graphics and the style) but it's really annoying that the highscores always open after losing.. i stopped playing because of that.. sry..

maybe you can make a button to see the highscores if you want?

[NG Poster Collab]

nice stuff but

there where some really nice pics but some of them looked kinda... boring.?
the tomfulp pic was kind of traced and maybe you should have better used a higher framrate so that the pic scrolls more smooth...
don't get me wrong, i liked the flash but there were just some points i didn't like.

oh yeah and it's alien hominid and not homonid... :P

JKAmovies responds:

I didn't trace him, I just tried keeping the same look as JohnnyUtahs version,

The Frame rate was 60FPS. . . Trust me, it ran fine :P

Thanks for the comment :P

[50 Optical Illusions]

feedback and suggestions:

this was a really nice piece of flash and i gotta say that i didn't know all of the illusions. but here are some suggestions:

- i really like the preloader but i've had an idea for it: how about adding another clock hand? i'm talking about a red one and this one will be at the place where preloader will be finished loading the flash. i know, there was a textfield, telling you how much time remains and this is why it won't be hard for you to make what i'm talking about..

- the quality of the pictures are sometimes really bad... for example: the young/old lady.... i was able to see: young lady, old lady, pixels. :3

- i forgot the third suggestion i'll PM you when i remember it.

all in all: great thing, cool design. keep it up!

["Notepad Drawing Collab"]

yeah guys!

great stuff u got there! some of them were not AWESOME but still cool, i think i liked every pic i saw. i wanna take part in those kind of collabs too! :O

next time u start something like this u gotta tell me! ;)

keep it up!

JKAmovies responds:

I'll be sure to let you know.

Thanks for your review :)

[Planet Platformer 2]

very beautiful game

it looks very nice, the controls are not too hard and the music fits perfect. i like it! i expect this on frontpage tom!

[+The Flash Tutorial+]

well....

as i can see you like adam phillip's work (as i do) and as i can see you bought his third tutorial (as i did). BUT! when you read the tutorial there is a part in the beginning where adam says:

"You may download, print and reference this chapter for your own use. Without express written permission from me, you may not duplicate or distribute copies of this chapter, resell it or reproduce any part of it in your own animation tutorials/books/articles in any medium, including print and online"

The problem is: you did! i like the tutorial and it's style but i also think that you don't have the permission to steal the fire of adam phillip's hitchhiker. although you credited him.

i'd give you a 9 for this tutorial but only if this was your work. sorry dude. you just get 2 for the style.

JKAmovies responds:

That's alright, I actually learn't that stuff at school in art class, I did notice that Adam Phillips included it but that's not where I found it?

[Newgrounds Flagging Guide]

it's said before but i'll explain it:

try not to use what font on black background. the problem is that it's hard for the human eye to watch this combination, after some time it's hard to read the text. usually we think that is has to be easy since white is the opposite of black but that's the problem. the contrast is too hard... try using a gray. maybe a 50% gray on black BG. i'm not advertising my flash here but you can go check my flame tutorials to see what i mean. to other thing is the light gray text on the buttons: kind hard to read because this time the difference was not much.
whatever these were just two ideas for improvement.

about the flash itself: i liked it very much and i think it can be very useful for many people here on NG. 8/10 because my eyes hurt but it would be a 10.

Little-Rena responds:

I know about solours, it's been said a lot in reviews but I couldn't fix the fla because flash didn't save it properly.

[Gravity Master]

most addicting game ever

simply one of the best games here. congratulations!

i didn't care about the score i just played and discovered many ways to solve a level, that's just so beautiful! one of the few games where even the player can be creative, not just the creator of the game ;)

awesome!

[Glass Bubble]

loooool

hi dude, the game was okay, nothing special but very good for one hour. i played it for some minutes.
but the reason why i'm reviewing is: seems like you like this song, right? (you also used it for the clonation thing.....)
and: man i love the way you respond the the reviews! :DDDDDD
i mean i just couldn't stop laughing when i read the review from MasterRater and your answer! xDxDxDxDxD

i give you 8/10 for the game plus 10/10 for making my day! :D
oh wait. i can't rate 18! shit.

VirusN responds:

I don't find my responses funny in any way, Mr Wasla... Wasika.... Wali.... FUCK!! Mr. OctoFlash.
PS: thanks for the review
PS2: consider changing your surname
PS3: i'm sorry this response isn't as funny as MasterRater's one, but the topic isn't dicks today...