OctoFlash's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guy Fawkes Safety Message]

nice work!
the only thing i'd like to address is the way his hat drops. i think it could feel a little more realistic if it came from a little higher... feel me?
anyway, i'm gonna go check out more of your stuff, bye! :D

Drawmill responds:

I Totally agree. There was a few things i wanted to tweak but the hat certainly needs to ark differently, i just have to be strict with how much time i spend on my weekly challenge :P

[Sheep Collab!]

WONDERFUL :D
I'm happy to be finally able to watch this piece, and i'm also happy to have participated in it!
Great editing and great choice of music! Even though in the end there were not as many entries as we hoped, I VOTE FOR A SECOND PART!
Here is my promise: If there will be a second edition of the sheep collab, i will contribute at least FIVE sheep. Here we go guys! :D

Lalo responds:

sweeeeeet! Next chines zodiac animal is the monkey, so maybe we could do something around that for 2016!

[Breaking Dad]

this is great!
but i think for timing reasons it would have been better if the moment where the guy jumps out of the bush would have been shorter. you see, the point of all this is in exactly that scene, but somehow the surprise was spoiled because of the "long" jumping-out.
can you see what i mean?
a good example for the timing i'm talking about would be happy harry's "a slice of action".

keep up the good work!

Sykohyko responds:

I know exactly what you mean. It's actually how I first pictured it, but when I started animating it I got carried away in making it all epic.

[The Forgotten Legion]

i can see some major oscar johansson influece here, am i right? either way, very well done, this could turn into a leading stickman series - just like castle! ;)
of course there is room for improvement, but i see no reason for you not to achieve a high level of quality. it's obvious that you put a lot of effort into this, congratulations of sticking to it! (no pun intended)

just some quick notes:
- "we can't be too careful" (i think that was a line, right? - there's a grammar mistake in the subtitles)
- they don't seem very upset of their buddies being left behind - i know they are tough guys, but a little clearer definition of characters and/or emotions would add some extra juice to the story-telling i think
- animation was well done, i especially like the way you play with perspectives

all the best, i hope to see more in future!

[Lazy Writing 9]

great, as usual. but probably the best part of this whole thing are the tags

"Lazy, homeless yotam writing."

:D

[--The Zelda Collab--]

wow

it came out better than i thought....!
i especially like the last scene, and after seeing mine now, i'm pretty disappointed with my part.. i could have done better but the collab was great!

[How I got my tablet]

maaan....

so you wanna tell me that you made those graphics w/ your new tablet?
you should have worked on your drawing skills before buying one buddy... really.. so you better practice hard now or i'll come to your place, get your tablet and give it back to you when you're better.. no offense, just practice.

jinxworld70 responds:

I said it was RUSHED.

My next one will be alot better.

" ALWAYS GETTING BETTER ALL THE TIME"

[Castle Repercussions - A]

yes!

what can i say? i've watched it a million times on your site and still can't stop watching it! i love the sounds and music, they match perfectly!
you brought stickman movies to a new level, respect.
and after seeing the other two parts (B, C) i can't wait for the final part "D"!

keep it up buddy!

Get-lost responds:

Thanks!

[WALK!]

some of them were ok

others were but and there was one i really liked: the snake in the shoe! xD man that really made me laugh...

i think the best one was the "handicapped"...

keep it up!

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review!

[RocketMan saves the day]

hey, what's wrong!?

this flash really deserved a higher score than 3.77! i like it and would like to see more episodes with this hero! =)

keep em coming!